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isainathan (September 16, 2008 at 6:54 am)
God this woman is so good. Have any of you read her novel 'them' from 1970? Genial!
Banakaal (September 13, 2008 at 1:31 pm)
I put a comma after 'ten-year olds'. The sentence needed a pause. Read it without pausing at the comma. Then you might wish to reconsider if a comma is optional or maybe even necessary. Do you know what a semi-colon does? It seems you don't know. I didn't miss a 'were'. I left in a 'they' by accident. That was a typo. Do you know what typos are? As I said,the character count in YT makes it difficult to write correct syntax and grammar.. OK Teacher?
davwar73 (September 13, 2008 at 12:14 pm)
A comma is not necessary after "ten-year olds". Also, you are a little liberal in your use of semi-colons. You've dropped a 'were' before written.
hotcarlreeves (September 1, 2008 at 7:50 pm)
goddammit dont censor me
Banakaal (August 31, 2008 at 7:51 am)
Your nickname says much. I agree, YouTube's Character count is a problem. Exact grammar is hard. You display ignorance of basics, so how can you expect anyone to take you seriously? Manuscripts that read as if they written by poorly educated ten-year olds, don't get published; unless the ten year old is a genius. I'm no 'bitter critic'; merely . trying to explain things as they are. Learn the use of the apostrophe. George Bernard Shaw could ignore this rule, (He thought) but we mortals can't.
Desertionreality (August 31, 2008 at 6:57 am)
What is it about the youtube community putting so much focus on spelling. This isn't a novel - it's a low class chat room where people blow off steam far more then make useful comments. Typo's happen. A year and a half ago I had a short story published in Asimov's; "A General Pacifist". The real point is that somebody who can judge a person's knowledge based on so little sounds more like a bitter critic then an ever growing writer. Go take as many classes as you want. It can't teach passion.
Banakaal (August 31, 2008 at 6:43 am)
If you don't know the difference between 'Your' and 'You're', then you would benefit from an English class before you start writing in the hope of being read. If you are here just for interest's sake then maybe you are forgiven!
CoolBigWillieStyles (August 19, 2008 at 7:44 am)
If anyone is interested, i really enjoyedThe Remarkable Resurrection of Lazaros Xby Les Terry, its an AUSTRALIAN novel,A must read, im pretty sure amazon has it.
hotcarlreeves (August 12, 2008 at 2:27 am)
bitch sure likes to talk |