Dcavolli (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

Ok this is contructive criticism. 1 the nose should be longer and thiner, 2 the eye brows are to far appart and when the noce goes up id does not curve away into the eeybrow its suposed to be streighter, 3 the eyes are a little bit to full you should make the eyes longer from end to end and thiner and 4 the face is more defined in the photo while you drwing looks like u added 15 pounds of weight on her but never the less good work yo! Art is always about improvement you can never become perfect!

padewij (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

to make it a bit shading (some parts are stil yellow) and i think this is the best way ;)

Keirosuke (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

i dont get why the yellow pastel was used before coloring the hair brown

IrisMG (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

If I may comment. It's good you lightened the left side some, it was looking too flat. Also, you need more shadowing on the right. And, I couldn't really tell, but I don't know if you'd fixed Angelina's eyes - they're green, not black. Otherwise, it's a good attempt. Don't know that I'd buy the video, though. That said, looks as though you'd have plenty of customers nonetheless!

lenakoevoets (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

I'm a fan !

nymidnight007 (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

i think angela jolie would love that...awsome work.

thefallenopendoor (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

she looks a little bit like tarja turunen at 2:25

smellypanda23 (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

well done! ur such a good artist! I can never get on with oil pastels but I'm better with pencils! =D

Senken2 (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

thats pretty damn great!well done!! :D

LmBaller20 (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

amazing...